So the piece of political communication I will be writing
about will be Sarah Palin’s blog post “Why ‘Drill, baby, Drill’ was right” in
which she both proves a point in how she was right with the idea to “drill our
way into lower gas prices” and also how Obama is now boasting about it even
though one of his platforms was against drilling in 2008.
The first
thing that you would notice in this is the fact that it is definitely written
by Palin. There is a tone that you can almost hear Palin (or Tina Fey if that’s
the train of thought you subscribe to) speaking the words. Another reason I
believe that it was written by Palin is there are times when there are errors.
These errors are not in the writing but in the way that it is formatted. In the
second paragraph there is a return in between “the Eagle Ford Shale in South
Texas” and “produced its billionth barrel of oil.” While these are very small
errors they are something that I notice and distract me quite a bit. However
this might just be the journalist in me.
In this
Blog she then goes onto site the state of the union by Obama this year where
she praised the people who have made us “free from the grip of foreign oil as
we’ve been in almost 30 years.” But she brings up that in Miami three years ago
he said, “We can’t just drill our way to lower gas prices.” So this gives her a
feel of being on the attacking side. This is just the start of the blog though.
She then
goes on, as any proud Alaskan would, to say how the Alaskans have been saying
that drilling for our natural gasses is the only thing to lower gasoline prices
and they have been dealing with the frustrations. She believes the biggest
frustrations for the Alaskans are dealing with people in DC and trying not to “Piss
away” another oil boom if it is to happen. She does sound very natural but at
the same time I feel to an older conservative this would come across as a
negative, but personally I think as a younger person that this style is
something I like.
She also
describes the energy sector as “the star athlete” and those in DC “scrambling
on the sidelines, unaware of how to react” which can really come across as
demeaning and almost insulting.
I think if
she were to make a presidential run she would need to keep the same if not just
similar message but learn how to express these points in a more professional
and respectful way. While she does make a good point about how her policy for
the energy sector and the oil industry was right it just came off a bit un-nerving
to me.
Do you think that Palin wrote the speech so that her readers would get the full affect of her as they read it? What are the benefits to this?
ReplyDeleteYou said you think she should keep that same tone and language format if she were to run for President in 2016. I have to disagree. I think a lot of people view her as a joke now days. The only way I would seriously listen to her is if she cleaned up those colloquialisms and dropped the schmallzy talk. If she came out speaking about the issues plainly and her plans on fixing things, I would be more inclined to take her seriously.
ReplyDeleteDo you think she ratcheted up the rhetoric to get a response from her base, or does she believe in this program that strongly? This is something I have frequently wondered about our girl Sarah.
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